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[RareMeat]

Hey guys thanks for taking some time to read this message.
Currently with what I had to work with to edit this intro was shit... (LOW GP FUNDING)

Anyways I kept it simple and clean nothing flashy just neutral effects. Drop a sub and like if you want.
If you want this intro. You can PM me for a link to download. (Rank me Up, I believe i'm a proud) ;)

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Edited August 18, 2016 by RareMeat

[Murkin]

its simple, i like it

[LieV2]

I really like it but I'd change the background to blue and give the bird a neon border rather than the purpleish one.

[Alcohol]

are you interested in making one for my clan?

 

obv ill pay you.

[Encre]

Not a fan sorry, I don't mean to be a cunt but it's not good

 

Not sure about the material, metal texture with a glass like reflection to it? Shadows are all over the place, the overall color scheme doesn't work, grey on grey just doesn't look good. The transition effects don't add to it at all, they just make it look cheap.

 

Edited August 18, 2016 by Encre

[Rites]

Is it just me or is the eagle off center in the last few frames? Otherwise looks decent not sure about the texturing

[RareMeat]

12 minutes ago, Encre said:

Not a fan sorry, I don't mean to be a cunt but it's not good

 

Not sure about the material, metal texture with a glass like reflection to it? Shadows are all over the place, the overall color scheme doesn't work, grey on grey just doesn't look good. The transition effects don't add to it at all, they just make it look cheap.

 

I love your honesty <3, Yes the effects are cheese and cheap. I didn't have time to find after effect for cooler effects and high resolution. I had to use.... Imovie......... if I had after effect i'd add a color correction to add a blue tint to the background and with a wave pulse effect. but my gp funding was low :P      R.i.P to After Effects

[RareMeat]

6 minutes ago, Elliot said:

Is it just me or is the eagle off center in the last few frames? Otherwise looks decent not sure about the texturing

it's a little off because of the camera position on C4D was sketchy 

[atexic]

doesnt look good in my eyes tbh

[Encre]

7 minutes ago, RareMeat said:

I love your honesty <3, Yes the effects are cheese and cheap. I didn't have time to find after effect for cooler effects and high resolution. I had to use.... Imovie......... if I had after effect i'd add a color correction to add a blue tint to the background and with a wave pulse effect. but my gp funding was low :P      R.i.P to After Effects

I just watched your other vids and you're pretty good with 2D stuff, you should definitely try to get AE and start learning it. Shouldn't be a problem since you already know photoshop, simple particles, CC etc. to "drown" the 3D make a world of a difference

Edited August 18, 2016 by Encre

[NIK™]

not my taste sorry, but i like the effort you put in :)

[Erik]

Seems a bit slow/laggy at 0:04 and the text about applying needs work on. Also what @LieV2 said:

 

56 minutes ago, LieV2 said:

I really like it but I'd change the background to blue and give the bird a neon border rather than the purpleish one.

 

Edited August 18, 2016 by Erik

[Ankhor]

Truthfully if you're stuck on going with this 3D idea;

 

At 0:04 it's rather laggy

Background should be a lighter blue and as Lie said a neon border would be ace.

I've also never really been a fan of 3D by itself as I think it doesn't look right, imo it only looks good in a background.

 

But gj anyway, I know it takes a long time to make this sorta shit :)

[Rolexx]

I really like the outcome.
About the funding, people will start funding once they realise somebody is really dedicated and has a serious passion for their art. 

[RareMeat]

22 minutes ago, Rolexx said:

I really like the outcome.
About the funding, people will start funding once they realise somebody is really dedicated and has a serious passion for their art. 

The funding is a joke, i'm trying to see if anybody take that seriously because while making this i could hardly play and make my own gp. but now everything is fine

 

[Ladam]

its long

[Austin]

40 minutes ago, lolitslad said:

its long

not really, all our intros are currently 11-26 seconds so it is still good

 

but id definitely change the background, just looks a little plain, i like the idea behind it, definitely has a lot of potential ! 

[Bjorn]

Kept it simple graphics wise but I like it

[Shawn]

If you just started making intros, this is a pretty decent

[Jake]

What software was you using to design the Foe logo? 

[Brendan]

9 hours ago, Murkin said:

its simple, i like it

 

[RareMeat]

3 hours ago, Jake said:

What software was you using to design the Foe logo? 

Cinema 4D and photoshop. First i had to make the logo myself and i came out a little jagged, then i exported to a .ai file and transferred to Cinema 4D and began editing.

Edited August 18, 2016 by RareMeat