My intro to my videos, just made.

[King Danil]

Hey guys, i wanted to make an introduction video for all my videos 1st before i actually make a... real video.

So here it is: (please tell me what you think. Took me quite a bit of time to make it since i'm a newbie at this).

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actual link: RuneScape - My introduction

[Zany]

Awful. didnt like anything about it.

[Guest Emote|Muse]

Pretty generic. Keep on messin' around with Vegas. You're gettin' there.

[Devlz]

Progess eh?

[King Danil]

4 awfuls? douches -.-

[Physical]

4 awfuls? douches -.-

Lol'd

[Its zeh noob]

Pretty generic. Keep on messin' around with Vegas. You're gettin' there.

This +

http://www.youtube.com/user/montagical

[King Danil]

OK guys... i made a new one -.-

What about this one?

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[Guest Emote|Muse]

The colors don't match at all. x.x they just look kind of ugly

[gfdgfd]

Tip: Get some cooler fonts :P would look alot better if it had a better font tbh.

[Its zeh noob]

Yea you need some fonts,

www.dafont.com

dl some cool ones, add them and use matching colours.

And go to youtube, watch some intro's and try to remake them ;D

[King Danil]

thanks  Its zeh Noob. ill go to that site

[King Danil]

The colors don't match at all. x.x they just look kind of ugly

Im new to this calm your ass down. And why put a girl as your pic? cuz the closest you will ever get to a actual human when your sitting on you ass all day :wow:

[TJ]

Learn how to flash and glare...

here:

[Darby]

The colors don't match at all. x.x they just look kind of ugly

Im new to this calm your ass down. And why put a girl as your pic? cuz the closest you will ever get to a actual human when your sitting on you ass all day :wow:

Why are you attacking him?  He was nice enough to give you constructive criticism rather than out right say it sucks.  You asked the community to tell you what they think and they did, you need to take the suggestions and work with them rather than getting pissy.

Your intro is cool by the way.

Just kidding, it blows.

[Guest Emote|Muse]

The colors don't match at all. x.x they just look kind of ugly

Im new to this calm your ass down. And why put a girl as your pic? cuz the closest you will ever get to a actual human when your sitting on you ass all day :wow:

Why do you have a bird as your picture? Are you a bird?

And I think Darby pretty much covered it. I actually tried to not outright say it sucked and you're giving me this bullshit?