A new style of artwork im trying out please rate and give cc

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Here it is, is it ok? please give constructive criticism and rate maybe?

[Cholesterol]

DATASS

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wha?

[d72]

DATASS

DATASS

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that makes no sense to me:/

[Hex`]

Is that a man?

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Is that a man?

No and can y'all not read? Fe that you say theres stuff wrong with it, i know there is but how can i make it better?

[Muchuchu]

hahahaha funny thread imo

ps artwork is not bad although im sure it will get better as you practice more

[Itz Tragic]

DATASS

DATASS

DATASS

[Tobyy]

Interesting. lol

[Devlz]

DATASS

DATASS

DATASS

DATASS

[Skyler]

[He11]

wha?

it got wrecked son

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so how could i improve it what did i do so wrong with the ass lol?