Simultaneous Endings.

[lntoxicating]

Last topic I made, I had posted a song that wasn't mixed and only half done.. Well, it's finished. Take a look.

Even if you don't like hiphop, this is softer stuff... So take a look :d

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8874087

Answering questions before-hand:

Yes, it's me.

No, I didn't make the beat

I did mix the vocals.

[lntoxicating]

bumping this :D look fuckers!

[SkidooosH]

did you do everything in the song? like the vocals? or just the mixing

[ya im chase]

Always love those songs you make <3 lol.

I'm jealous

[lntoxicating]

did you do everything in the song? like the vocals? or just the mixing

Yeah bro it's me. I just didn't do the instrumental. I get those from a site that sells them, then add my vocals and mix it.

And thanks chase :D Glad you like it bro.

[SkidooosH]

dam bro that's sick, i listened to it like 10 times while i was playing my xbox,

[lntoxicating]

haha awesome. There will be more soon. I'm putting out a cd in a few months, as well.

[SkidooosH]

let me know when you do

[Adam|Note]

It's just talking.. :S

To slow paced for me.

[lntoxicating]

Hardly talking. You can try if you'd like ;)

[6 9i]

wasnt good :s

[lntoxicating]

wasnt good :s

do better.

[6 9i]

wasnt good :s

do better.

i didn't know this was a compition.

i thought you wanted our opinions because you posted it.

[lntoxicating]

wasnt good :s

do better.

i didn't know this was a compition.

i thought you wanted our opinions because you posted it.

"wasn't good" is a broad comment that can span a whole spectrum of views. If you'd like to comment on what you didn't like, sure.. But to say something "wasn't good", without the ability to do better, is aburd.

[6 9i]

The beat was just not good at all

the lyrics were hard to understand and see in my head. Mainly the start of the song though..

mumbling isn't a good way to start a song in my opinion.

The way you rap is boring.

The Chorus part wasn't catchy, like it usually should be in my opinion..

[I C0NN0R I]

pretty decent, but i reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaallllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyy don't like hip hop :\

[Bows 0n Fire]

Can you crank up the vocals a little bit?  I need to turn up my speakers a lot to hear them over the instrumentals as it is.  Other than that I like it.  Listened to some of your other stuff multiple times and waiting for more.

[lntoxicating]

The beat was just not good at all

the lyrics were hard to understand and see in my head. Mainly the start of the song though..

mumbling isn't a good way to start a song in my opinion.

The way you rap is boring.

The Chorus part wasn't catchy, like it usually should be in my opinion..

There was no mumbling. Fix your speakers. I'm guessing you enjoy that 'shake your ass' shit. Maybe some soulja boy? Or are you in to the gangster, i shoot my 9 and fuck bitches, shit?

Either way, if this isn't for you, fine. I'm not forcing it on anyone. You're one of the first to not like this song. I've got fans.

As I said before, if you can do better I'd love to see it. If not, being a backseat driver only gets you in to accidents.

Thanks connor, even if you dont like it lol.

@bow: Going back to turn up the vocals would mean remixing it. There's going to be a remixed version out when I put out my mixtape. It's all being mixed by a friend of mine. Also, I've got another song coming out soon. This week I hope :D

[6 9i]

The beat was just not good at all

the lyrics were hard to understand and see in my head. Mainly the start of the song though..

mumbling isn't a good way to start a song in my opinion.

The way you rap is boring.

The Chorus part wasn't catchy, like it usually should be in my opinion..

There was no mumbling. Fix your speakers. I'm guessing you enjoy that 'shake your ass' shit. Maybe some soulja boy? Or are you in to the gangster, i shoot my 9 and fuck bitches, shit?

Either way, if this isn't for you, fine. I'm not forcing it on anyone. You're one of the first to not like this song. I've got fans.

As I said before, if you can do better I'd love to see it. If not, being a backseat driver only gets you in to accidents.

Thanks connor, even if you dont like it lol.

@bow: Going back to turn up the vocals would mean remixing it. There's going to be a remixed version out when I put out my mixtape. It's all being mixed by a friend of mine. Also, I've got another song coming out soon. This week I hope :D

I've got fans.

I don't know how you could have fans, sorry. Fans as in friends i assume?

There was no mumbling. Fix your speakers.

There's more people then just me that have said something about the vocals being wacked so you need to fix your mic or maybe learn to speak normal and not mumble?

I'm guessing you enjoy that 'shake your ass' shit. Maybe some soulja boy? Or are you in to the gangster, i shoot my 9 and fuck bitches, shit?

No, i'm not..just saying that yours wasn't a catchy rhyme, i don't know where you got me referring to soulja boy, or shooting a 9 and fucking bitches from, but ok.

As I said before, if you can do better I'd love to see it. If not, being a backseat driver only gets you in to accidents.

No one's trying to compete with you, so stop with your replys saying this..you posted this on a forum, you're going to get good or bad feedback with comments just take it and either go with it or just ignore it.

[lntoxicating]

Fans as in top 50 on soundclick, the biggest internet audio site on the web.  By your logic, any band that I don't like would not have fans... Makes sense, right? That's childish.

one person said my vocals were low. That's different than 'mumbling'. Trust me, I don't 'mumble'. I could careless if you like it, as I said above. Move on then... If I don't have fans, then I'm not in the top 50 hiphop songs on soundclick.

Great logic, son.

» highest in charts:  # 369  (1,546,896 songs currently listed in HipHop)

» highest in sub-genre:  # 27    (118,807 songs currently listed in HipHop > Alternative Hip Hop)

Try harder. As I said, I'm not forcing you to listen to it. Go play somewhere

[gfdgfd]

I don't understand why you're arguing with him when he's giving you constructive criticism? Anyway.. Didn't really like this one, not as good as the song with these lyrics:

a fate hanged, dangled adjacent complacency

the love in her stomach made her bury her face in me

one wrong move when a wish gets granted

& hell breaks loose on the gods who stamped it

Can only find the topic for it and it doesn't have a name on there... and i see you've removed it which is lame cause i listen to it quite often ¬.¬ now i can't.

[lntoxicating]

I don't understand why you're arguing with him when he's giving you constructive criticism? Anyway.. Didn't really like this one, not as good as the song with these lyrics:

a fate hanged, dangled adjacent complacency

the love in her stomach made her bury her face in me

one wrong move when a wish gets granted

& hell breaks loose on the gods who stamped it

Can only find the topic for it and it doesn't have a name on there... and i see you've removed it which is lame cause i listen to it quite often ¬.¬ now i can't.

Nah, he's annoying.. I hate people that act as though they can do better. There's a difference between constructive criticism and being condescending without merit.

anyhow, I removed that particular song (and the others before this one) because it's getting rerecorded and remixed so it'll sound pro. glad you listen to em tho, dude. You can always d/l them when they're up.

[gfdgfd]

Yeah it required me to sign up to the website to download it which i didnt fancy doing so i just went under your profile, went to last topics made to find the topic with it in, went to the website and listened to it on there every time xD

[6 9i]

Fans as in top 50 on soundclick, the biggest internet audio site on the web.  By your logic, any band that I don't like would not have fans... Makes sense, right? That's childish.

one person said my vocals were low. That's different than 'mumbling'. Trust me, I don't 'mumble'. I could careless if you like it, as I said above. Move on then... If I don't have fans, then I'm not in the top 50 hiphop songs on soundclick.

Great logic, son.

» highest in charts:   # 369   (1,546,896 songs currently listed in HipHop)

» highest in sub-genre:   # 27    (118,807 songs currently listed in HipHop > Alternative Hip Hop)

Try harder. As I said, I'm not forcing you to listen to it. Go play somewhere

No fans as in, i don't know who in the fuck would like that kind of song/music you're attempting. sorry, hope i helped you understand my logic a bit more.

Alrighty then, your music still sucks. i gave you my opinion on what i didn't like, and you took it like a 10 year old. good luck with your attempt at a career/hobby with rapping, you're wasting your time. Bye

Nice fans btw..

[6 9i]

Oh shit, sorry creamie pies i will never double post again. i'm really sorry bro.