Vid 1 - b a m b iii - "The Old Days" (Low lvl Hybrid) [FOE]

[b a m b iii]

Well um this is my first video there were about 3 lures to start off the video so please watch te whole thing, i was only using ancients for the lures but at 2:15 i pk and use range and d bow.

Please give me constructive critism like

Rate out of 5:

Editing

Music

Clips

cheers, heres the link to the video.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M424J8-E3y8

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M424J8-E3y8

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M424J8-E3y8

[I ItalyPK I]

1st,

first of all where is hybriding?

-Shit music

-Kid Editing

-Luring

-Bad hits

-horrible swaps

in conclusion 0/5

[Mucca|Blackops]

i h8 luring 

[Snipers]

Are you a member of FOE? Why does the video title say [FOE]?  o.O

That vid had no high hits, no real switches, luring? :L And it was too short.

[Boring_Ffs]

1st,

first of all where is hybriding?

-Shit music

-Kid Editing

-Luring

-Bad hits

-horrible swaps

in conclusion 0/5

[Gareth l Rare]

1st,

first of all where is hybriding?

-Shit music

-Kid Editing

-Luring

-Bad hits

-horrible swaps

in conclusion 0/5

[HybridAng3l]

Well.. comparing to my 1st vid, i found ur vid way more entertaining, didn't like the lag init tho.. pretty dark video.. i'd say... 2½/5. maybe 3.

Songs were kay, but used.

Kinda slow switches.

[Steroids]

Awfull, take [Foe] out of the title if you post it anywhere else please.

[Shad3y]

What did ya tell those guys to get them into the wild lol? (The ones you lured)

[HADUKEN]

I see everyone posting negatives about the video, yet noone giving any advice too improve the video?

I'd suggest getting slightly better stats before you attempt too make a video again. so you can make it more entertaining and hybrid better.

and try get someone else to edit for you, so it is more fun too watch. Should also throw in more variety, and work on your swaps. ;)

Godo luck on your next one. <3.

EDIT: I would take out the [FOE] from the title, because of the fact you're not actually foe. ;D

[VLS Drop Plz]

Shit framerate.

[ChaosChouse]

1st,

first of all where is hybriding?

-Shit music

-Kid Editing

-Luring

-Bad hits

-horrible swaps

in conclusion 0/5

[Shut Up Kid]

1/5

-your not foe

-bad music choice

-choppy at times

-dark vid

-begginner editing

i would:

-get better stats

-practice switching

-take out [FOE]

-not lure

[Cub]

2/5, The video was really laggy so many some render problems? Also the clips were rather dull, so you might want to improve those. Its also over edited and the songs are over used.

[Ranger Ltu21]

are u kidding with this "pk vid"?...lure,fails on attacks etc.

[exHustler]

0/5, saw teles.

Luring?

Bad drops.

Bad stats.

Much to improve on.

[b a m b iii]

0/5, saw teles.

Luring?

Bad drops.

Bad stats.

Much to improve on.

Teles dont work in that world, and when i switch back to a normal world i just tele instead of walking

[Muchuchu]

Teles work in any world even in bounty they just tele you to edgeville though

[Creamie pies]

U suck kid.. Pking with monks? You should fight me Im close to your cb level

[ZacWillmer]

The vid description says your stats are.. "My Levels: 55 combat, 50 attack, 50 strength, 1 defence, 71 range, 71 magic, 45 prayer, 63 hitpoints" ... Imo you got pray far to early o.O. Also you should use addys not mith, since your 50 att. (n)

Train stats more and please don't lure.. :angry: Also i'd remove [foe] from the title.. because your gona get ALOT of haters. and why is the title called  "the old days" 

I only watched the first clip btw.. it's all i could take.

[TJ]

I know you probably put in allot of work, and ill give you a 2 for that.

but as far a the actual video goes it was not as good as it could have been.

You can't just post lures and think people are going to like what they see.

They want to see you kick the shit out of noobs in a FIGHT.

Other than that the panning was really annoying, try to keep it steady lol.

and the music wasn't my taste but thats just me.

sometimes when your making a pvp video you have to take into account the viewers, and what they would like to hear.

I have often lately seen allot of "dubstep" music which seem s to be very popular among pk videos.

2/5.

[Folk 4 Lif3-Trae]

dont ever make a pk vid with burst (n)

[Corrupt3d]

Hott Topic

[plex]

i believe hybriding is when you have at least 2 different ways to attack and you use them.

in the vid you only mage someone or just range them. the music hurt my ears, and the editing was..more or less shit.

i'd say this will imrpove ur vid:

-Learn to hybrid better(im not saying this in a douchey manner i mean it literally)

-get higer magic for at least blitz.

-get a little better taste in music :shifty:

i hope you take time reading this..bye

[plex]

...

hey hey bro..how bout you gtfo.

kthxbai