Jamal Gfx picture :)

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What do you think? i dont think it turned out too badly i think the hill needs to be better...

WITH OR WITHOUT CLOUDS?

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I think i prefer this one to the previous one with a lower hill...

Progress?

[Stand]

I'm loving the theme severed. The Nature theme is a nice way to go. With the grass I would suggest over doing the grass at different sizes and then cropping off the bottom so you get a nice thick set of grass. As you said, work on the hill a little bit, looks too "cartoonish" for the shaded grass and gradient sky. Maybe some clouds? a sun? or faint light source from a side? And if you're going for a sunrise look then make the shading a bit darker (sky, hill, and grass). I like the reflection look but you could go with a text placement on the hill with the curve of the hill to guide the text....

Lots of CC but I think it's looking great. More like quick opinions though. I really like your work.

Keep it up :nice: (that's what she said)

Edit: Amazing addition of clouds. but it means you're going to have to match that detail in the hill and grass.

[Mori]

pretty good but as u said the hill needs working

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I'm loving the theme severed. The Nature theme is a nice way to go. With the grass I would suggest over doing the grass at different sizes and then cropping off the bottom so you get a nice thick set of grass. As you said, work on the hill a little bit, looks too "cartoonish" for the shaded grass and gradient sky. Maybe some clouds? a sun? or faint light source from a side? And if you're going for a sunrise look then make the shading a bit darker (sky, hill, and grass). I like the reflection look but you could go with a text placement on the hill with the curve of the hill to guide the text....

Lots of CC but I think it's looking great. More like quick opinions though. I really like your work.

Keep it up :nice: (that's what she said)

Edit: Amazing addition of clouds. but it means you're going to have to match that detail in the hill and grass.

Wow thanks stand:)

i really liek your work too i wish i was as good as you at cartoons and pixels :) ok oon the grass so different sizes and thicker? and ok im gonna completely redo the hill i think lol

[Stand]

That means a lot severed. Thank you. I'm just a beginner though.

You've got all the components of a great gfx picture here, just some minor things to play around with.

For that pesky grass, yeah different sizes and thicker. And then crop the roots out.

Good luck with the picture severed, keep up the awesome stuff! :nice:

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thank ill get right to it

HOw is this :)

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updated :)

[I C0NN0R I]

this ones best imo, but you need make the grass lower so that only the cat tails stick up , and not as much grass overall.

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this ones best imo, but you need make the grass lower so that only the cat tails stick up , and not as much grass overall.

ok lol i got told to ad more crass XD but yeh ok

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look to my original post i got rid of some grass ect well i completely redid the grass actually :L for the 3rd time :)