CC s'il vous plait :)

[Harvey]

Just made this,
for some reason I just don't like it,
someone tell me why haha.

Edit:
New attempt, more happy with it;

[Stand]

good render choice and the background is subtle yet colorful in a way.

I don't see good flow in the sig... and it seems to me like there are too many light sources (or one inconsistent one). It's got lots of potential though.

:nice:

[Harvey]

good render choice and the background is subtle yet colorful in a way.

I don't see good flow in the sig... and it seems to me like there are too many light sources (or one inconsistent one). It's got lots of potential though.

:nice:

Thanks :) but yeah I think you're right about the flow, it just isn't there. And i'll take the light sources into account aswell.

Think i'm gonna have to go back a few steps and have another shot. I put one too many gradient maps in early on which kinda messed it up aswell.

[`Stef]

don't like it :/

[Harvey]

don't like it :/

Me neither that's the point lol,

but whyy? don't just wanna give up on it :)

[Cal]

How do u gfx lot do all this, talented shit lol

[Harvey]

How do u gfx lot do all this, talented shit lol

haha, practice  :p

Had another shot and went for much more natural colours.

Thoughts?

Edit:

This aswell

[W4tch|Nick]

i like them all :)

[Stand]

amazing redo Harvey. Solid work. I'm a big fan of the second one.

Great font choice and lines :nice: I'm not a fan of the effects on the text though. I like you could lose the gradient and shadow.

Edit: also put the light source to use and dodge some of your render (on her arm, hand, and the gun)

[Shut Up Kid]

Ce Sont Tres Bien. Tu Parles Francais?

[Harvey]

amazing redo Harvey. Solid work. I'm a big fan of the second one.

Great font choice and lines :nice: I'm not a fan of the effects on the text though. I like you could lose the gradient and shadow.

Edit: also put the light source to use and dodge some of your render (on her arm, hand, and the gun)

Your CC is really helpful hah :)

Tried to follow everything you said!

Ce Sont Tres Bien. Tu Parles Francais?

Merci. Desole, je peux parle en peu de Francais. as far as my GCSE in it will get me haha.

[Stand]

Thanks Harvey and solid work on the sig. It looks amazing. Very eyecatching and great job on dodging.

:nice:

Can't wait to see more from you!

[I C0NN0R I]

first is nice,

pop out sigs on the other hand...  :sick:

[Devlz]

first is nice,

pop out sigs on the other hand...  :sick:

i actually like the popout

it's not as overdone as many of those you see everywhere

good job harvey  :nice:

[Harvey]

first is nice,

pop out sigs on the other hand...  :sick:

i actually like the popout

it's not as overdone as many of those you see everywhere

good job harvey  :nice:

Cheers,

I normally really don't like pop out sigs either, but I thought i'd try and it and for some reason i feel like this one kinda works.

Dunno, might just be me though :)

But yeah thanks!

[d72]

The popout one turned me off to be honest; for some reason I'm just not feeling it.

Overall it's looking good... Your light surces should be defined a bit more in my opinion :Hi:

[Ipk No Mercy]

nice good job :P