melee4y0u Posted April 7, 2010 Posted April 7, 2010 here it is: made a few changes: some different backgrounds: Think this is the final edit now:
Marc Posted April 7, 2010 Posted April 7, 2010 I rly like it , maybe cuz am getting the cape in a few days or a week or something ;o
severed arow Posted April 7, 2010 Posted April 7, 2010 it's got some nice aspects to it but it looks liek some on had anal bleeding and shat on it :/
Harvey Posted April 7, 2010 Posted April 7, 2010 yeah 6/10 maybe 7, good start. and wytch your sig is fucking hilarious haha.
melee4y0u Posted April 7, 2010 Author Posted April 7, 2010 the blood is ment to be there btw whole effect of pking
Harvey Posted April 7, 2010 Posted April 7, 2010 The cape looks nice, it's the background that's the issue, it's just kinda there. Try doing something which adds focus to the cape instead, or even just adding a border might do something. Also the swirly thing, not sure what to call it, is a bit rough on the edges and goes slightly over the cape, if you can sort that out it'l look nicer :)
Gareth l Rare Posted April 7, 2010 Posted April 7, 2010 get rid of the blood (doesn't work in my opinion, unless was you killing someone) make cape bigger and line are thiner Other than that its not bad, needs work but practice makes perfect. :)
d72 Posted April 7, 2010 Posted April 7, 2010 First off stop beveling everything, it's an incredibly tacky effect. As Rare said, the blood doesn't really look too ergonomically appealing. Also, try and stay away from just using random C4Ds and different coloured brushes and try building your own background... Also the pen tool's a bit too linear tbh, try and make the coil tighter toward the cape rather than just being a bunch of jagged lines. Good improvement from the last pieces you've posted, well done :nice:
Skyler Posted April 7, 2010 Posted April 7, 2010 9 coz its my fav cape10 cuz im unique, or should that be 0?
TJ Posted April 8, 2010 Posted April 8, 2010 not liking the border :( i dont think it even needs one. really tacky imo. likin the swirls tho
Zaku Posted April 8, 2010 Posted April 8, 2010 Love it coze its my first and favourite 99 skill cape ;)
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