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The cape looks nice, it's the background that's the issue, it's just kinda there. Try doing something which adds focus to the cape instead, or even just adding a border might do something.

Also the swirly thing, not sure what to call it, is a bit rough on the edges and goes slightly over the cape, if you can sort that out it'l look nicer :)

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Gareth l Rare

get rid of the blood (doesn't work in my opinion, unless was you killing someone)

make cape bigger and line are thiner

Other than that its not bad, needs work but practice makes perfect. :)

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First off stop beveling everything, it's an incredibly tacky effect.

As Rare said, the blood doesn't really look too ergonomically appealing.

Also, try and stay away from just using random C4Ds and different coloured brushes and try building your own background... Also the pen tool's a bit too linear tbh, try and make the coil tighter toward the cape rather than just being a bunch of jagged lines.

Good improvement from the last pieces you've posted, well done :nice:

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