gfdgfd Posted May 25, 2009 Posted May 25, 2009 Hey, i just finished doing my 3rd cartoon sig for me and my friend's void pures xD I put more work into the sky/sunset, the grass could of used alot more work, but i didnt know how to geta grass effect other than lots of different coloured lines xD I dont know wether the colours go well together, but yeah :P i like it Please, CC would help alot as i am still learning, tell me what i did wrong and what i did right :P Thanks
Silent Posted May 25, 2009 Posted May 25, 2009 Your pieces are getting alot better Imo. Anyways i think the main thing i dont like about this is the body shapes, they're just to square-ish for me. Gj anyway man. Btw i think the text ruins it. :mellow:
gfdgfd Posted May 25, 2009 Author Posted May 25, 2009 Your pieces are getting alot better Imo. Anyways i think the main thing i dont like about this is the body shapes, they're just to square-ish for me. Gj anyway man. Btw i think the text ruins it. :mellow: Yeah i need to get better fonts, and learn how to make better text.. but i wanted our names in it, and i thought just static text with plain crappy font would look silly, and yeah i can see what you mean about the bodies xD Thanks for your input.. Hmm also what i need to do is do a border first >.<
d72 Posted May 26, 2009 Posted May 26, 2009 Biggest thing in any sort of hand-drawn signature is anatomy; Work on anatomy! Your pieces are definitely getting better. Also, go to sites such as DaFont.com and search around for fitting fonts, there's tons out there. Also, stay away from animation; It's way too cheesy. Keep practicing, you're definitely progressing! (y)
I C0NN0R I Posted May 26, 2009 Posted May 26, 2009 a big improvement mate, i still don't like the text though, leave it normal... Also, don't use drop shadows and don't use bevels, they look like shit. edit: Also wtf @ the grass? lol
Tap U Hard Posted May 26, 2009 Posted May 26, 2009 i like the sunset background, ppl are a little boxy but doesn't bother me its cool =P text is distracting tho and the ".." is kinda gay, But i cant talk, good job i like it ;D
Devlz Posted May 26, 2009 Posted May 26, 2009 I think you're getting better and better. I think you should work on the anatomy and I think you should use something else as a font, because that animation just sucks... Nice job tho. Good uck practicing. :)
gfdgfd Posted May 26, 2009 Author Posted May 26, 2009 Right well in my next sig.. I am going to do a border... download better fonts.. no animation.. and work on anatomy, hopefully it'll be all better.. shame i'm going to run out of my photoshop trial in 24 days.. ah well i guess i'll try harass my parents to buy me it.
Skyler Posted May 26, 2009 Posted May 26, 2009 kinda blocky' lol if you see what i mean..... nice job though and good idea.
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