What do you think of my songs (:

[Sacred Term]

All these raps are written and performed by me (:

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[Sacred Term]

An example of stuff I write.

never felt this before, eyes closed i walk out your door, cause i cant take it no more, youve got me nailed to the floor, o ya you got me like glue, cause babe im so stuck to u, and everytime that i leave, i just happen to c, all the stuff in our past, and it makes me believe, tht baby u are so perfect, u the girl of my dreams, and i wake the next day, but now im startin 2 bleed, from the wound in my heart, ya you caused this disease,

[gfdgfd]

Silly Patrick, you havn't added any videos yet.

[Sacred Term]

Ya I have there is like 10 of um o.0. You probly have 2 have me as a friend. Just add me.

[gfdgfd]

Not adding you, sorry, why don't you post them on youtube or something?

[goonstar]

GL . no matter what people have to say about what you write. do what you do

[Sacred Term]

Lol im 2 lazy

[Cholesterol]

An example of stuff I write.

never felt this before, eyes closed i walk out your door, cause i cant take it no more, youve got me nailed to the floor, o ya you got me like glue, cause babe im so stuck to u, and everytime that i leave, i just happen to c, all the stuff in our past, and it makes me believe, tht baby u are so perfect, u the girl of my dreams, and i wake the next day, but now im startin 2 bleed, from the wound in my heart, ya you caused this disease,

gay & emo

[Eric]

An example of stuff I write.

never felt this before, eyes closed i walk out your door, cause i cant take it no more, youve got me nailed to the floor, o ya you got me like glue, cause babe im so stuck to u, and everytime that i leave, i just happen to c, all the stuff in our past, and it makes me believe, tht baby u are so perfect, u the girl of my dreams, and i wake the next day, but now im startin 2 bleed, from the wound in my heart, ya you caused this disease,

gay & emo

take a chill pill and float back down to this world

if you wanna live to see another sunrise, i suggest you note this serious look in my eyes,

i've never told a lie,

and i've chopped down niggas twice your size,

lord of the flies, and lord of this city, i take no pitty,

or prisoners, square nerds, cant even figure out how to escape these deadly words,

runnin all around lookin more than absurd,

when all i'm really doing is lining up some nouns and some verbs, i'll take a proverbial turd,

in a sandwich, and force feed it to you, black and blue,

will be the only way i leave you,

if i spoke a word untrue, i'll go invest in some superglue,

just to see what that can do,

but i doubt that'll stop me, i'm 24/7 hyphy,

you know the cops dont like me, and every girls dad wants to fight me, its so enlightening,

when i have silly niggas steppin to me,

keeps me grounded, and constantly, remembering, never mourning,

the other niggas that fell without warning,

because they approached with a tone,

now theres nothing left but sticks and stones, there ya go i just threw you a bone,

lolwut?

explanation: i typically write either "metal" lyrics, or folk-y kind of stuff, but my buddy and i were having little facebook comment rap battles back and forth for some reason (all in fun) thats just like the last verse of the last one i layed on him.. he quit quickly after that.. hahahahha

[Gareth l Rare]

i take it your younge so not going to flame you.

just try adding/using simmilies and metaphors and you'll get better and if you keep at it, go far.

although your barz are weak dude