To Idolize Posted August 10, 2010 Posted August 10, 2010 I really like the left side but the contrast in black/white is a bit too much on the right side. I feel the white is a bit too drastic. The edge of the gun should have been blended into the background a bit more as well. And finally, the text could use lots of work. I feel that's what ruins my appeal to it. The text is very "bold" and becomes more of a focus than the render/stock. None the less, it's a nice piece of work.
Sacred Term Posted August 10, 2010 Author Posted August 10, 2010 I really like the left side but the contrast in black/white is a bit too much on the right side. I feel the white is a bit too drastic. The edge of the gun should have been blended into the background a bit more as well. And finally, the text could use lots of work. I feel that's what ruins my appeal to it. The text is very "bold" and becomes more of a focus than the render/stock. None the less, it's a nice piece of work. Thanks I am still learning photoshop so any tips helps (:
To Idolize Posted August 10, 2010 Posted August 10, 2010 Try looking into a few text tutorials. It would help improve a signature a lot. Text could easily make or break art.
Sacred Term Posted August 10, 2010 Author Posted August 10, 2010 Try looking into a few text tutorials. It would help improve a signature a lot. Text could easily make or break art. What do you think about this version.
plex Posted August 10, 2010 Posted August 10, 2010 2nd version is alot better imo, the text was reallly out of place, if you added a little color to the 2nd version itd be really good
To Idolize Posted August 10, 2010 Posted August 10, 2010 Try looking into a few text tutorials. It would help improve a signature a lot. Text could easily make or break art. What do you think about this version. I like this version a lot more. Try adding a few black/white gradient maps to add a darker shade of black. Also add a few levels/curves to mess with the colors.
Sacred Term Posted August 10, 2010 Author Posted August 10, 2010 Try looking into a few text tutorials. It would help improve a signature a lot. Text could easily make or break art. What do you think about this version. I like this version a lot more. Try adding a few black/white gradient maps to add a darker shade of black. Also add a few levels/curves to mess with the colors. Check out the one above your post (:
To Idolize Posted August 10, 2010 Posted August 10, 2010 I like the black/white one better. I just think you should have added a bit of a contrast with the black to the grey to the white.
Sacred Term Posted August 10, 2010 Author Posted August 10, 2010 I like the black/white one better. I just think you should have added a bit of a contrast with the black to the grey to the white. Ok thank you for the advice, do you have msn?
TickTock Posted August 11, 2010 Posted August 11, 2010 0 Depth no attempt at text placement, probs more wrong with it as it's the typical novice sig, but cbf looking..
Louis|LYRlC Posted August 17, 2010 Posted August 17, 2010 Very nice, As of your other one. Very well use of layers. 10/10. Louis, LyrLc x
I C0NN0R I Posted August 17, 2010 Posted August 17, 2010 Try looking into a few text tutorials. It would help improve a signature a lot. Text could easily make or break art. What do you think about this version. I like this version a lot more. Try adding a few black/white gradient maps to add a darker shade of black. Also add a few levels/curves to mess with the colors. Your better off using a contrast adjustment, levels sometimes fucks with the quality of images when you use it to bump up shadows, it's used more for fine adjustments in news print.
mlaK Posted August 21, 2010 Posted August 21, 2010 Try looking into a few text tutorials. It would help improve a signature a lot. Text could easily make or break art. What do you think about this version. I like this version a lot more. Try adding a few black/white gradient maps to add a darker shade of black. Also add a few levels/curves to mess with the colors. that version is boss
Sacred Term Posted August 21, 2010 Author Posted August 21, 2010 Try looking into a few text tutorials. It would help improve a signature a lot. Text could easily make or break art. What do you think about this version. I like this version a lot more. Try adding a few black/white gradient maps to add a darker shade of black. Also add a few levels/curves to mess with the colors. that version is boss Thanks (: do you want a signature by any chance?
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now