Good Text?

[FlapJack]

Dont rate the sig, i made it in 5 minutes. Usually text is my week spot but i wanted to know if this was better? :D

[To Idolize]

No. Should have put it in the upper right hand corner where it has negative space.

[FlapJack]

v2

[Sacred Term]

I don't really like the text ):

[Gareth l Rare]

Without text and the red lines just make it bit chaotic

too many c4d's in action for me (with only the dots would be best IMO)

[To Idolize]

Make the text smaller. Use a different color on the word "Rain" and move it up so it's in the reddish negative space.

[TickTock]

The fire looks good in original spot, but the raining/rain is a bad font and just plain black doesn't really work...

The sig seems cool though

[Ketamine]

Not bad mate, Could use little more.. But for 5 minutes, not bad at all.

[plex]

nah, i dont know enough to give advice but its not great

[I C0NN0R I]

Nah Idolise i like text better when it's part of the focal point, negative space is there for a reason, if you fill it with text it's no longer negative space.

I don't really like the font, there's more to typography then placement/font family. :\