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  • 2 weeks later...

Very impressive Ryan, I like your writing a lot. I'd love to read more. I used to like to write poetry myself but I've lost the creativity I used to have, and it was nowhere near as good as yours.

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Ethan|Unicornz

Roses are red, violets are blue, I pretended to be a woman and made 300M, how about you?

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I'll give u 500k to be my runescape gf for a week

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I had a cat named snowball, she died, she died, mom said she was sleeping, she lied, she lied! Why oh why is my cat dead, couldn't that chrysler hit me instead?

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I scooped up the mooon

In my waterbucket and

Spilt it on the grass

Trying to find the meaning in this.

Hope there is, because it sounds sick.

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Panic seeps through onto my sleeves

In a time where keeping calm is a necessity

But I can't seem to pull myself back together

My mind drifts away on ice cold thoughts

Focused on the past and what it brought

Trying to relive the memories

But the shattered mirror reflects nothing

My dream catcher is just a web filled of regret

And my coffin is just a place to rest my head

When each new dawn promises night

And each newborn is just a spark of life

I caught a glimpse of reality

And wore it on my chest like a badge of sympathy

Watching the artists lines connect so clear

Fate is something we all must steer

Onto the path from which we came

Or into the wall, living life in vain

Promises aren't something you're forced to keep

They're more like lies that only you can see

-me

Black Lines and Clouded Minds

whats left to do when you're running on empty

who's  hand are you going to grab when you start to drown

am i the only one here without a guardian angel

or am i just too proud, too proud

now i lay me, down to sleep, i pray to the lord, as i being to sink

god saved everyone, but forgot about me, i'll just sit here with my thoughts

that are ever so deadly

life's clock might tick, its haunting last tock

for someone, tonight

but who can know, and who will care

everyone tries so hard to be special

to provide something unique to set them apart

it wears me too thin, having to peer, through each and every facade'

so in troubled times like these i feel like no one

nothing important perfectly defines me

but i cling to the hope that one day

someone might find importance in me

as we slowly dig our own graves

into this hell we call home

my thoughts rest with you now

counting on the fact you'll know i've grown

so i'll tell you what do when you're running on empty

who's hand you should reach for to grab

there is no one on this earth, that can help you more than yourself

or maybe i'm just, too proud

-me

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Topic is gay.

i dont write poetry i write lyrics, so mine kinda dont fit here.. but after watching those Rafael Casal vids and postin em i figured i'd contribute to this thread one last time..

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  • 1 year later...

Very impressive Ryan, I like your writing a lot. I'd love to read more. I used to like to write poetry myself but I've lost the creativity I used to have, and it was nowhere near as good as yours.

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