I NEED FEEDBACK@!@!@!@!

[E N C O R E]

*Warning - The picture is very large as it is a desktop background*

I just downloaded and started using Adobe Photoshop CS5 last night and this is what I made, a based on my Youtube Channel, I don't know whether its good or not and I need to get some feedback good or bad, any is welcome and constructive critisism would be very much appreciated.

The only feedback I got was from a friend and he said that "it was awesome and I cant believe you just started GFX" haha.

If anybody wants me to make one of these for them i'll have to charge because it took me several hours (believe it or not) because as I said I just started last night so i'm still learning.

First Try:

Second Try:

Another Project (Red Theme)

*Yes, I do have an epic logo now! :D*

CC Please!

[d72]

Although it lacks some of the basic aspects, I will critique the image as if it were a Youtube background.

The clouds look randomly placed, and that spiral effect in the middle of the text looks really LQ and doesn't really fit the rest of the picture tbh

Also the "Pure Community" text is kind of weird, and I'm not really feeling the amount of shit around the Kataklyzm text; some of the stuff around it is kind of random, like for example the leaves and stuff, although it is a good idea it's just too abundant.

Also, the background itself with the stars looks kind of strange with the rest of the picture, but that's just me.

Overall however I like what you've done with the Kataklyzm text, but I feel like the amount of effects you've poured into it could be toned down significantly.

Yet, however I think it looks cool here and there as a Youtube background :nice:

[E N C O R E]

Yeah I just got a ton of brushes and was hyped and wanted to try alot of them out :D

I'll definitely tone them down when I do another picture :p

I rly liked the leaf brush because they looked abit liked birds and I thought, hey, foe. :o

The cloud brushes looked awesome so I wanted to try them all out too xD

Thanks alot :D

1 thing, do you know how can I improve the quality of this when in photoshop? Because other pictures I see on the internet look really high quality and I put maximum quality and it still looks quite pixelated :S

[BDG]

I reallyyyy liked this. I like the Fonts, Effects, everything. 10/10 in my book.

[I C0NN0R I]

bro gl charging peopel for that 0_o

[Ethan|Unicornz]

Pretty damn good for a first, it does seem a little busy but that's to be expected, and obviously it's good to be experimenting with a lot of different things when you're just starting out. Continue to do GFX, and post here to get CC. You seem to have talent, and you'll improve very quickly. I hope to see your name in cyan one day.

[E N C O R E]

Thanks BDG And Ethan!

Ya Connor I bet its better than ur first try.

[I C0NN0R I]

Thanks BDG And Ethan!

Ya Connor I bet its better than ur first try.

That is irrelevant.

[Jesus]

Not bad man, I'm just starting to get into Photoshop. Impressive for a first try :)

[Venscape]

Tysm Adam :)

[Pekoraali]

Nice.

[Lip Job]

ITS LIKE A SPARKLE EXPLOSION

nice tho

[Venscape]

:o

[E N C O R E]

Updated! CC Please!

[d72]

Don't bevel everything; it's tacky :S

[Shut Up Kid]

its kinda cool but the name kataklyzm is gay

[Venscape]

lol