Clutch jesus 1st pk vid watch! :D

[clutch jesus]

[Afimm]

I think the beginning is a little drawn out and i can't even read what you were typing.

The editing is pretty trippy too lol

[hectic power]

hey nice :D

[Diisfunk]

I'm sorry but... WTF! :(

[Eye.]

WAY to slow.. did not understand a thing in ur intro and the music made me want to shoot my self tbh, no offence and i only got through half of the vid so i had to exit it can't even rate :(

[Atomic]

Diddnt like it.

2/5

[Iz Ahrim Iz]

Some constructive criticism.

-Your intro was far too long, an introduction should just introduce your video and leave it at that.

-Couldn't read your introduction at all, words were far too small and some clips in your video were not clear b/c of the editting

-Try to shorten your clips and omit clips without kills

Otherwise, good start and gave you some things to improve on for vid 2.