Draft 3

[Royal Extacy]

hows this one?

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[TJ]

Ummm... Interesting....

Better than before, voice needs some work still. I'd coach you, but my mic is shit right now.

[gfdgfd]

fuk off

[Octavarium]

That sorry at 0:25 is so hieously autotuned yet the vocals are still off... I could only manage up to the 2nd chorus.

Well written lyrics though, get a singer and a drummer and record those as well.

[Adam|Note]

[TJ]

That sorry at 0:25 is so hieously autotuned yet the vocals are still off... I could only manage up to the 2nd chorus.

Well written lyrics though, get a singer and a drummer and record those as well.

I'll sing the lyrics if you'd like.

[Toby|Doggie]

ya dun noe me

[Octavarium]

That sorry at 0:25 is so hieously autotuned yet the vocals are still off... I could only manage up to the 2nd chorus.

Well written lyrics though, get a singer and a drummer and record those as well.

I'll sing the lyrics if you'd like.

No. I'll drum and sing instead.

[TJ]

That sorry at 0:25 is so hieously autotuned yet the vocals are still off... I could only manage up to the 2nd chorus.

Well written lyrics though, get a singer and a drummer and record those as well.

I'll sing the lyrics if you'd like.

No. I'll drum and sing instead.

You can drum, I'll sing, he can play the guitar. Now we just need a bass....

[Next In Line]

That sorry at 0:25 is so hieously autotuned yet the vocals are still off... I could only manage up to the 2nd chorus.

Well written lyrics though, get a singer and a drummer and record those as well.

I'll sing the lyrics if you'd like.

No. I'll drum and sing instead.

You can drum, I'll sing, he can play the guitar. Now we just need a bass....

Me me oh pick me!

[Toby|Doggie]

got this on my ipod

[Octavarium]

I can play bass too. I'm not having you singing on anything I produce though TJ.

[TJ]

I can play bass too. I'm not having you singing on anything I produce though TJ.

I've been told my voice sounds like the combination of fergie and jesus  :whistle:

But I can actually sing though. Was in a band a long time ago, and also sang church choir :D

Inb4 :csb:

[Acclaimed|Jordan]

hmm. You need someone like me to work on the beat.

[Tango_Oscar]

I be the bouncer 4 ur gigs!!!

[TJ]

I be the bouncer 4 ur gigs!!!

DEAL!~

[Mortuls]

look what the cat dragged in

[Octavarium]

Write down these lyrics, record yourself and we'll collaborate. I look forward to hearing you.

[TJ]

Write down these lyrics, record yourself and we'll collaborate. I look forward to hearing you.

I'll try, broke my turtle beaches, so i have to use this shitty 15$ mic.

[gfdgfd]

fuk off

[Logan|Ravaged]

Yo maybe this is better off going on fb or somethin not on foe forums lulz

[Smush]

Wtf is this? Sounds like a dying hippo.