Pencil sketch :3 C&C me please :D

[severed arow]

So I've been drawing a lot lately, mostly cartoons and landscapes, thought id post a toon to et some CC, this is jsut the sketch stage, the final lines / inkign and colourign has still to come but heres what i got so far :3 I think i got the anatomy ok, and the clothes, I'me aweful at drawing clothes but here we go:

Very funny...

[Hichamproductions]

Good job, I think you should make a more detailed eye. And also adjust her left (from our view) arm. Good luck making the final version ;)

[Paxman]

I think the arms look a bit out but i like the style.

are you going to scan it in and colour it on PS? Would look really good

oh and the clothing is really good, you got the folds right

[ph0ne]

other then that, beut.

[I C0NN0R I]

arm is kinda crooked, but i didn't really notice it. Leave the eye it looks win.

Head is too small, but you could just make the torso smaller and it'd fix it.

[severed arow]

Ok thanks guys, im not drawing any more detail onto the eyes thats somethig nthat can come with colouring, Ill fix the arm + conner i can cheat and make the head a lil' bigger on photoshop :3 + @ paxman im gonna scan the final sketch in and then probably cresize anything that needs resizing as a whole + clean it up a bit in photoshop, then il lgo ahead and move it onto paint tool SAI and ink over the lines and colour it in.

Thanks for CC ^-^

[Dutch Ork]

nice severed <3

offtopic;  do you still play runescape? I can remember we played allday and night together. but then after turm you quitted? :O. I've never seen you back ;(.

mm i have namechange btw.

[severed arow]

nice severed <3

offtopic;  do you still play runescape? I can remember we played allday and night together. but then after turm you quitted? :O. I've never seen you back ;(.

mm i have namechange btw.

I havent played in a very long time :3 And don't intend to go back :P What was your RSN?

[Devour]

i would like to have sex with her, gime # pls

[DeltaPapa]

its good but i dont like the trousers. she looks likle she is about to go to a 80's disco party

[I C0NN0R I]

its good but i dont like the trousers. she looks likle she is about to go to a 80's disco party

oh yer i forgot to point that out, except i was thinking cowgirl pants.

make it more dress-like, like flowing around the ground etc.

[Devised]

Good job it looks great

[Cybawave]

Idc what anyone says if you can do that...damn respect

[Pour]

pretty sick

[Swag]

That's awesome :nice:

[Tony]

kool

[cody]

looks good to me m8