iTz LuKe Posted January 12, 2012 Posted January 12, 2012 Hey. I havent posted much on the forums lately, its been a long ass time; but I've got back into Runescape. Last time I played, I wasn't rapping. Now I am. So I figured I'd share some of it with you. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hKRl73usraU
Octavarium Posted January 13, 2012 Posted January 13, 2012 work on lyrics. internal rhyme, complex similes. use them
iTz LuKe Posted January 13, 2012 Author Posted January 13, 2012 Quote flow - good voice - good lyrics - shit Thanks for the criticism homie. Quote work on lyrics. internal rhyme, complex similes. use them Will do. but I'm not trying to be an MC droppin' crazy punchlines, metaphors and set ups. If you peep most my music, its just therapy; the 16 bars a week is probably the only songs/verses where its at an MC standpoint. Quote No offense but those lyrics were really bad No offense taken. An opinion is an opinion. I just wish people said this earlier, tbh; lmfao. I never really hear criticism, its just about how great I am most of the time; and so its dope to hear something different, even if its just hate and not criticism. The only hate I get is like "youre not black" or "u look stupid with your braces" most of the time. Braceface since I was 15. Reppin' it up <3 ;)
Swag Posted February 10, 2012 Posted February 10, 2012 Your flow & voice is really good, the lyrics need some work, Keep it up brah.
Adam|Note Posted February 10, 2012 Posted February 10, 2012 Why is it that Americans sound good even with pretty diabolical lyrics. Take a horrorcore approach with your next video please, but not that whack Tyler the Creator type shit. Complex dark bars.
Sopuli Posted February 11, 2012 Posted February 11, 2012 Don't really listen that much to rap but that was pretty good, keep it up.
Joose Posted February 18, 2012 Posted February 18, 2012 I'll rap battle you man =] Let's have some fun.
MakaveLi Posted February 23, 2012 Posted February 23, 2012 decent, i rap too hit me up if you wanna battle on team speak or anything haha
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