First sig in like... a year + image manip

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Well i've completely moved away from making sigs, they serve no purpose except forums, they aren't going to get you anywhere. Anyhow i was bored and decided to make one, it's not very good, its been ages since i last made one.

What do you think?

V2 cause V1 was aweful.. .still pretty bad but... yeh

Anyway, tried to redeem myself with an image manip

Images used:

http://themanwhofellasleep.files.wordpress.com/2011/08/twitter_the_man_who_fell_0107.jpg

http://th07.deviantart.net/fs9/PRE/i/2006/036/e/c/Concrete_Basement_Wall_Texture_by_FantasyStock.jpg

http://www.freestockphotosclub.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/06/Abstract-Cement-Floor-Texture-520x390.jpg

Result:

updated: http://i43.tinypic.com/350lb8l.png

old: http://i39.tinypic.com/ncfl29.png

old

[Gareth l Rare]

Errm, soz J but i dont like it

wind + brush's dont work in the background and the left side doesnt sync

and since were on topic i dont really like ur sig tbh

colour is all over the place, effects dont flow and just looks caotic, gone happy trigger with brush's.

:(

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Errm, soz J but i dont like it

wind + brush's dont work in the background and the left side doesnt sync

and since were on topic i dont really like ur sig tbh

colour is all over the place, effects dont flow and just looks caotic, gone happy trigger with brush's.

:(

I didn't make my sig :P MY mate made it for me and I like it so i use it :P And i did say they were bad :P I don't really do sigs anymore, pointless things to make :P I just let other people make em for me.

Anyway, tried to redeem myself with an image manip

Images used:

http://themanwhofellasleep.files.wordpress.com/2011/08/twitter_the_man_who_fell_0107.jpg

http://th07.deviantart.net/fs9/PRE/i/2006/036/e/c/Concrete_Basement_Wall_Texture_by_FantasyStock.jpg

http://www.freestockphotosclub.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/06/Abstract-Cement-Floor-Texture-520x390.jpg

Result:

http://i39.tinypic.com/ncfl29.png

[Gareth l Rare]

wow your good

Banned for spamming in GFX Section

[I C0NN0R I]

I can't decide whether i like the first one or not 0_O lol at first glance i do, which i guess is what matters if it's a forum sig, but when i take a closer look it isn't as appealing.

For the second one, the whole piece seems very centered/mirrored, as though the light source is directly behind the person, yet the shadow on the text is the same direction on the left and the right sides of the light source. The shadow on the word "dead" seems like it should be cast further left, so on an opposite angle to the word "end".

Also the text itself doesn't feel liek it's part of the actual scene, i think mostly due to the stroke on it. Maybe try making it 3D instead?

Also the lighting on the ground doesn't make any sense. The dark corners don't match the same darkness as the walls, and the bright spot in the centre shouldn't be there. For a light to cast such a long shadow it's going to be basically behind the man, and therefore the ground would be mostly fall-off illumination not a direct source as it is atm.

edit: Gareth how'd you get him banned? lmao

[TJ]

I like the concept of it, but I do think there's just to much neg space.

Try adding more to it.

[I C0NN0R I]

not even, the text balances the negative space.

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I can't decide whether i like the first one or not 0_O lol at first glance i do, which i guess is what matters if it's a forum sig, but when i take a closer look it isn't as appealing.

For the second one, the whole piece seems very centered/mirrored, as though the light source is directly behind the person, yet the shadow on the text is the same direction on the left and the right sides of the light source. The shadow on the word "dead" seems like it should be cast further left, so on an opposite angle to the word "end".

Also the text itself doesn't feel liek it's part of the actual scene, i think mostly due to the stroke on it. Maybe try making it 3D instead?

Also the lighting on the ground doesn't make any sense. The dark corners don't match the same darkness as the walls, and the bright spot in the centre shouldn't be there. For a light to cast such a long shadow it's going to be basically behind the man, and therefore the ground would be mostly fall-off illumination not a direct source as it is atm.

edit: Gareth how'd you get him banned? lmao

Thanks for the CC, I'll try some of that out after college today, I also noticed that the join between the right wall and the back wall looks a little unnatural so ill try to sort that too, but yeh the lighting does need a little work.

[Tango_Oscar]

Agreed, theres wayyyy too much negative space imo.

Need to even out the syncing of the left side.

Just looks like uve gone mad with the brush tbh

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Agreed, theres wayyyy too much negative space imo.

Need to even out the syncing of the left side.

Just looks like uve gone mad with the brush tbh

._. It's not negative space its a room its supposed to look empty, sense the theme. Also the only brush used in this is a soft edges white and black brush.

[I C0NN0R I]

Oh i thought the negative space was referring to the first sig, in either case it's fine.