My first GFX thingy...

[Ethan|Unicornz]

changed text:

better?

carnifex ownzzz

[Cal]

Nice improve by changin colour of writing

[I C0NN0R I]

yer the text utterly ruins it.

[Ethan|Unicornz]

yeah, now that i look at it a bit more, i probly should change the text

[I C0NN0R I]

dude, make the text like 12 pt and a different colour, and add a gradient map or two to tie it all in.

[TickTock]

I pretty much see no effects there.

No offence but you need some work.

Get some better fonts and learn about placing them well, then work on colour and depth.

But first, get some background effects :)