i was bored lol

[David|Ew]

rawr?

i got bored was only a quick edit 15 minutes tops

[Anthony]

im not a big fan on the text

[David|Ew]

which pair?

David|Ew

or the other?

any ideas to make it better?

[I C0NN0R I]

the top text is rank, outer glows fucking fail, and the BG is too light.boring imo.

[To Idolize]

The outer glow is way too bring and doesn't fit to well. Also I think you should have lowered the opacity in the scanlines to make the background flow a bit better.

[David|Ew]

alright ill do my best to get better

[To Idolize]

Good luck on getting better but you're on the right track for a start. :)

[Lip Job]

u alredy have this in another topic!? :o

[To Idolize]

u alredy have this in another topic!? :o

Apparently he added "improvements" but I've yet to see them.  :mellow:

[David|Ew]

u alredy have this in another topic!? :o

Apparently he added "improvements" but I've yet to see them.  :mellow:

my attempt at the improvement is my signature now

idk if its any better but i tried

[I C0NN0R I]

too dark, needs a levels map.

[Lozz|Alex]

Pretty good but i think is a bit dark. :victory:

[TickTock]

Meh, below average.

Work on decent affects, scans don't always cut it.