Mr l3m0nz Pk Bh World's vid one PREVIEW

[Mr L3m0nz]

Heya Guys!

Here on my pure Mr l3m0nz G mauler.

I Rush :o And this video isnt really Honour But not many maulers are...

Please Enjoy Sub Rate Comment :D

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[Walli]

awful, sorry only word i can think to describe it.

[Mr L3m0nz]

Fair enoth, how come you think its awful?

give me points so i can improve upon. probly going honour soon. No honour isnt fun.

[PkraNger|Ahrim]

I fucking loled.

Nice bone loots

[Mr L3m0nz]

yeh the loot what crap. but for the real vid it should be better.... i hope.

[Walli]

1) have more then like 3 kills or w.e

2) get kills with good kos

3) dont put rushing a guy for a hp level in a pk vid.

4) shorten ur clips, u keep lots of pointless shit footage from fights.

they are just a few points to start from

[Steve|1337_Welfare]

What a Fucking Shit Video

[mr d stroy]

It's a preview.

[Mr L3m0nz]

Thanks Walli and Welfare, you dont have to be rude? :(

dont even know why i thought of getting into foe some day.

[Mr L3m0nz]

yes it is a preview thank you very much Mr D stroy. :)

[Steroids]

YOU SILLY LEMON!

[lilpure]

pretty boring :(

[o0 o00 ooo0]

cmon be easy on him it's his first vid.. just gife him some tips

[K1ss0fd34thx]

Don't disrespect the kid just because his video was bad.

-K1ss0fd34thx

[K1ss0fd34thx]

Something you may want to improve on though, and this is before I have even watched the video...

Do not make a dramatic intro like this, when your stats are so low.

Most Pures have 82 Magic.

I'm 4 Attack levels from being a maxed Zerker Pure and I wouldn't even do that with a video.

If you want to dramatize things, make sure you have flawless stats.

-K1ss0fd34thx

[K1ss0fd34thx]

More to add.

Your title is the preview for Mr L3m0nz correct? If so, why do you even include footage of you pking on your main?

Edit out the parts where you run out of wild, you should just show quick loot, and cut after you knock someone out.

And the amount of kills was minimal.

-K1ss0fd34thx